Veena’s review of Crave (Billionaire Bachelors Club, Book 2) by Monica Murphy
Erotic Romance published by Avon Impulse 13 Aug 13
Crave is the latest entry in the crush du jour of all things erotic and billionaire bachelors. Unfortunately, it’s not a craving I share, particularly after reading this book.
The character of Archer is bland and immature and just does not fit into my image of a worldly billionaire. I understand trying to create a nice, likable guy instead of the usual ruthless workaholics, but he really does not evidence any characteristics of a boy done good or a sophisticated man born to wealth and privilege. I will admit that I am probably basing my assumptions on an image fostered by other authors and not on personal experience.
He’s always had a crush on Ivy, his best friend’s young sister, but she’s been off limits to him. When he finally gets to pursue his interest and finds that it’s reciprocated, he comes across as a callow youth with his first girlfriend. None of the interactions between them seem to fit the character that I expect. Perhaps the one bit of evidence contrary to this is toward the end when he has his friend make an appointment with Ivy and shows up instead.
Also, not to nitpick, but it’s not clear to me if the billionaire status is because of his family with whom he is estranged or because he’s made his billions from his one exclusive resort in Napa Valley.
I also find Ivy’s character a bit one dimensional, but given that she’s sheltered by a rich brother and doing well in her chosen profession, her character is a bit more plausible. I do admire her, however, for first walking out on Archer when he lies to her brother about their relationship and then to his friend. No girl deserves to be treated like a dirty little secret, and, actually, those actions of Archer just cements in his immaturity.
Except for brief glimpses at Archer’s two friends, who are to have their own books, there aren’t other characters who could have added depth to the story.
I am disappointed and I definitely don’t plan on reading the other books that are to complete out the series.
Grade:
Summary: D
Billionaire Archer Bancroft always gets what he wants—and he’s wanted Ivy Emerson, his best friend’s sister, for far too long. Being forbidden and untouchable only makes her more tempting. When a million-dollar bet with his friends throws down a challenge—last bachelor standing takes all—Archer knows he can win. That is, until one enchanted evening with Ivy takes his heart for a ride.
Ivy knows Archer is nothing but bad news: Infuriating, arrogant…and completely intoxicating. But despite her best efforts, she can’t seem to keep away. When a stolen kiss leads to a night of heated passion, Ivy realizes she’s in trouble and in head over heels.
But in the light of day, everything seems clearer and Archer’s not so sure a one-night stand is all he wants. Concocting a plan to keep Ivy by his side, Archer might just be willing to lose this bet…and win the jackpot instead.
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