Today’s guest author, Madeline Hunter, shares her view on coloring within the lines (or not!)…
About four years ago I fulfilled a life-long dream when I took my family on a Mediterranean cruise. I don’t remember when I first fixated on a vacation like that, but it was right up at the top of things I wanted to do before I died. So I saved my pennies and finally I sprang for the big splurge.
While on the cruise, we toured the Amalfi Coast south of Naples, then visited the Roman ruins of Pompeii. The drive along the coast was worth the cost of the trip in itself.
The road snakes along the hillside, high above the sea. The drop to the sea is straight down in many places, and an incredibly steep slope in others. Towns and villages cling to this land, hanging over the deep blue water. Inlets and bays abound that are like fjords. It is so steep, so awesome, that my husband who suffers from dizziness at heights could not look out the coach window.
Punctuating this dramatic landscape, perched on fingers of land overlooking the sea, are medieval watchtowers, built when the Normans controlled this land. As we approached one I had a fantasy of a woman standing at the window, looking out. She was a lovely, unusual woman with long red hair, someone out of place in southern Italy and very Celtic in appearance.
That was the first seed of LESSONS OF DESIRE. That tower and that coast and that woman. No plot, no names, just images. I knew that one day I would write a book that used this setting.
Even though the rules said I should not.
Now, we all know that there are no rules when it comes to romance novels except that the story end happily. Actually, the “official” RWA definition speaks of the story ending optimistically, I believe, which even leaves a bit of leeway on the happy part.
So, no rules. None that are written and even fewer that are admitted. And yet rules have a way of taking hold anyway. No one ever announces them. No editors carve them in stone. Readers do not savage writers who disobey. The rules just show up, get passed around, and put limits on what writers are allowed to do.
Normally it is the “market” that is blamed. The “market” does not allow this or that. The “market” isn’t good for stories with widows, it is said. The “market” abhors flashbacks. The “market” will not accept the death of a child. The “market” will not accept infidelity or adultery.
I began writing not knowing any of the rules. I joke that I was out in the wilderness when I wrote my first novels, oblivious to anything about the “market”. So I broke a lot of rules. I opened one book during the year of the Black Death and, yes, a youth died in chapter two. The hero expected to die as well. No, he didn’t die. I did not need a rule to tell me not to kill off the hero.
Even after I left the wilderness of my isolated writing and learned the rules, I sometimes broke them. I had adultery in a book, knowing full well that I would lose some readers over it. It was the book that had to be written for those characters, however.
Which brings us back to the reason I was not supposed to use that spectacular setting of the Amalfi coast. One of the rules that has always surprised me is the one that says you can’t set an historical romance outside of Great Britain.
Well, you can, but it won’t sell. Well, it will sell, just not as strongly as your other books. Editors warn writers about this. Some forbid writers from moving the characters to another country even for a chapter.
I first heard about this rule while I was revising a story that, you guessed it, took place outside of Great Britain. Great, I thought. Here I am, almost done with this story, and NOW you tell me.
My editor had not clued me in. She had read the synopsis and approved it. Another writer gave me the news. Leave England, she warned, and your sales are doomed.
Too late. The book was published with most of it taking place in Brittany, not Britain. Titled THE PROTECTOR, it has become one of my best selling titles.
That was because it was a medieval romance, another writer explained. For Georgian and Regency, you better stay in England.
Only I had an idea for a story that began in France. A really compelling idea. It would be my first book in this new time period and I really wanted it to do well. Maybe I could change the setting to Scotland or something. Maybe. . .
I wrote the book and set the first third in France. It was my first one in THE SEDUCER series. It made the New York Times list and it too is among my books with the highest number of sales.
Well, another writer said, France is different. Sometimes you can get away with France. Just don’t go farther afield. Don’t go to, say, Italy. Books set in Italy bomb.
Except that I had an idea for a story that . . . well, you know the rest.
So here I am, waiting to learn the results of the first week of sales for LESSONS OF DESIRE. Will the market figure out that a good chunk of it takes place on the Amalfi coast? Will readers avoid it if they do a bit of skimming in the store and realize it isn’t all in England? It begins there and the last third takes place there. The main characters are very English. But the rule says I wasn’t supposed to go there. Italy, the common wisdom insists, is outside the “market’s” comfort zone.
The “market” means readers. Readers like you. Do you insist that all your stories stay in England or Scotland for their entirety? The rule did not appear out of thin air, after all. It is the result of many books that had disappointing sales that were attributed to the setting not being England. So maybe the rule is a good one. Maybe the market does penalize those stories set elsewhere.
Maybe up until now I have just lucked out.
What do you think?
With LESSONS OF DESIRE I finally exorcised the image of that woman with long red hair at the window. And I used the tower. It plays a very special role in the book.
Rock on, Amalfi Coast. Love it. We gals of Unusual Historicals salute you!
Hi Madeline! As I’m reading about “the rules”, I realized that I was guilty of those same warnings in a way. If I held two historicals and one was set in Great Britain and one in Italy, I would read the GB story. But you made me ask myself why. And it came down to this– I basically know what to expect from a Regency era story set in England. So, assuming I’ve hit on a universal reason, maybe it’s a self fulfilling prophecy– we don’t read historicals set outside of GB because we choose the familiar, but because writers avoid settings outside of GB since they don’t sell, then those other settings never get a chance to BECOME familiar to the readers.
Although I admit I can’t explain why readers like me clamor for something different and then choose the tried and true. That makes no sense, does it?
I guess I should mention that one thing WON’T change for me– if I’m holding a book set in SCOTLAND and one set in Italy, well, as much as I melt for Italian men, the fact is that the kilts are gonna win out every time. ;-D
Hi, Bev,
Yeah, I think it is the familiarity, even though lots of readers know something about Italy and it is high on the “must visit” destinations. Romances are comfort reads, so that comfort level probably has a lot to do with it.
I will break the rules, but I don’t ignore them. And I encourage the marketing department to keep them in mind. I don’t think the cover copy should lie about the setting, but I also don’t demand that they plaster ITALY all over it, if you know what I mean.
I wonder if it is only an issue at the choosing the book stage. In other words, once a reader is reading a book, will she stop reading it or get annoyed if the characters leave Great Britain?
As for the kilts—I understand completely
Madeline
Rules, schmules. *G* I think an author needs to use whatever works as inspiration. If it gets the job done, then so be it. Honestly, I think some rules were made to be broken, don’t you?
Best broken rule #1 – She must be a virgin.
Best broken rule #2 – Location location location.
Best broken rule #3 – He must be an experienced lover.
Let’s see – any more? And aren’t those photos of the Amalfi Coast AMAZING? I had the toughest time picking which ones to use and had to stop myself! What a beautiful part of the world.
As much as I love the books that take place in England, I, for one, am all for the Italian experience. After eagerly and impatiently waiting for the new book I haven’t had the time to really dig deep into it yet, grr, but I am very excited about it. My husband is in the military and if we can we are going to try for an overseas command in, yep, Italy. I think Italy has great potential for great romance. It may not hold a great deal of the romantic charm that England does, but that doesn’t mean it can’t all together. Personally, I think the books worth while are the books that expand out of the readers comfort zone. I love the anticipiation of what to expect next. But, that’s just me.
With what Bev said about Scotland though, I couldn’t agree with her more. I don’t know if it is my Scottish background or what, but a man in a kilt….Hummina Hummina Hummina!! =D
I’m just different, I guess. I’ve always searched far and wide for historicals set in different places. I adored one I found with a Cossak hero set on the Steppes and one set in medieval Latin America. I had wondered why they are so hard to find. I had no idea authors were beiong warned away. Sad to me. :^(