Recently I read on a list that history is all a matter of opinion, not of specific facts, so I thought it was worth revisiting the historical romance, and the knotty topic of accuracy. Does it add to a romance, or take away from it? [Gwen ed.: read more about the Ducks’ views on historical accuracy by following the Accuracy tag here.]
If you take the various Acts of Parliament, the political history in general (it’s all documented, word for word, always has been), plus the economic developments then you have a sound basis for discussion and opinion. But you can’t do it without that framework, and in my mind it’s unalterable. There are certain facts you can’t change, and some that evolved and arrived gradually, but there are some things you can’t alter.Sometimes it’s because they never happened, and there has to be a reason why not, other times it’s anachronisms.
To take things I’ve seen in historical romances, there are some things that just couldn’t have happened.
- A known, famous courtesan marrying a peer of the realm and them being accepted into society with open arms.
Never happened. Couldn’t. Various authors (including me, I have to admit, in A Chance To Dream) have played with the trope, but you have to work really hard for it to become probable.
- Peers of the realm becoming pirates.
It never happened. You have to dig into the wherefores to work out why, but since it never happened, there must have been a reason why not. (Lots of reasons, any of which would work). The most important thing – it never happened.
- Regency gentlemen drinking whisky or whiskey from a decanter on the sideboard.
Whisky (which is Scotland-specific) or whiskey (anywhere else) wasn’t legalised until 1823 and the great technical development, the Coffey still, which made it possible to produce Scotch in bulk, wasn’t invented until 1831. A gentleman could have it distilled for his own use, but it wasn’t a common drink, and didn’t really get popular until the 1840’s. Give the darlings brandy instead.
- A medieval Scottish warrior brandishing his claymore.
No claymores until the late 16th century. They weren’t even called that until then. I’ll leave it to the weapons experts to explain why, because it’s not my area.
- A medieval Scottish warrior wearing a skirted kilt in his clan’s tartan.
Skirted kilts weren’t developed until the 18th century. Before then, they had a plaid, sometimes known as the “great kilt.” No clan tartans until the 19th century, although there were geographically-specific patterns and colors from which the tartan was developed. So you’d be able to say “from the Lomond area” but not “You’re a Campbell.” Or something. If you could see the colors, because the plaid was never washed. It served as a blanket, as well as an item of clothing.
If you know anything about history, it’s likely these details will jerk you out of the story. If you don’t, it’s likely the story will be the “generic” type and if the reader has experience with lots of historicals, they’ll notice how flat the story is, and not be able to put her finger on it. If it’s labelled “historical fantasy,” go girl, put a dragon in and I’ll run all the way to the bookstore to buy it!
Writers owe it to their readers, and to the people they are writing about to make it as real as they can – and that includes sound world-building and accurate history. By all means, speculate, discuss, but base it on a knowledge of what happened then, how people thought then, and you’ll have a great story.
Are there any books based in American history that are this far out? Would a writer of contemporaries get away with sending the traffic the wrong way up Madison Avenue, or having all the avenues in New York have two-way traffic? Why should we expect anything less of the historical writer?
It’s an insult to say “it’s only a romance, so it’s okay, I can write what I like and get away with it” or something else I’ve overheard, “They’ll never notice.” So what? The other person a writer should respect is herself and her art.
I’ve only read one Elizabeth Hoyt so far, for instance, and I already know I love her work and I can forgive her the odd slip, if she makes them, but I’m too busy reading to notice. She gets the feel right, the spirit of the age, and she works hard to fit her characters into a recognisable era and voice. I don’t ask for absolute accuracy, only that the author tries. Or calls it something else.
So if the writer respects the genre they right in, the people and the times she is writing about, and her own writing ability, she should think about getting the details right. Please. So I have more historical romances to read. I dearly love a good historical romance, and I haven’t read too many recently.
And when is the new Kinsale coming out? Please make it soon, my copy of Shadow Heart is worn out!
Great post! Some things that happen in historical romance novels that we accept as part of the genre could never happen; meanwhile, some things that actually happened would be too bizarre to put into a novel! Personally I don’t care too much. I do get annoyed if something is glaringly inaccurate, but that doesn’t stop me from enjoying the story too much.
That being said, I love it when an author shows me they’ve really done their research and can show me new historical details I haven’t seen before.
“Are there any books based in American history that are this far out?”
Of course. Best example I have is Sara McCarty’s ‘Sam’s Creed.’ I like McCarty, truly I do. And I am perfectly willing to overlook all those Texas Rangers who never seem to do any Rangering. I got used to the lack of proper female under-pinnings a long time ago. But how can you write a Western and not even concern yourself with the proper firearms? I’m not talking make and model – I mean the basic which-end-do-you-load-from stuff.
The book is set in Texas in the 1850’s. The hero carries a Colt Single-Action revolver (10-15 years before they were invented), there is mention of a crucial telegram sent from Texas to somewhere on the East Coast in the 1840’s (no, just no), and the pivotal scene in the book involves dynamite. It took me 2 seconds on Wikipedia to confirm that dynamite was invented in 1866.
I just don’t get it.
The new Kinsale, French Lessons, is coming out in January (in time for my birthday! Wheee!) from Sourcebooks. I picked up an excerpt at RWA Nationals. One chapter in, it’s FABULOUS.
Oh boy.
I never notice. I’m not good with history, so the error would have to be glaringly obvious. Yes, for a history buff, every error is glaringly obvious. But for me, it would have to be something completely ridiculous like a digital glo-lite watch in the 1700’s or the date 1580 BC on a caveman’s calendar (yeah, that was lame…told you I’m not good at this stuff).
I hadn’t a clue about the claymore or kilt thing. And whiskey/whiskey/brandy–that’s way over my head.
I’m more likely to notice a misplaced modifier or an unnecessary comma than an anachronistic article of clothing. LOL
Love SHADOW HEART.